Although we have had our deadline. Our teacher has given us some feedback on our video and has told us to change it accordingly to make it better. George has come up with a few ideas to replace the shots that we need to get rid of.To replace the cartoon shots there will be more shots of me.This will include a shot of a hand tapping along to the rhythm of the music which will go alongside a shot of a foot tapping followed by me looking out of the window "when i look out my window
